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Can you edit this plz?

 
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Sybil Conner



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PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 7:24 pm    Post subject: Can you edit this plz? Reply with quote

The French revolution throughout the periods 1789 through the Reign of Terror in 1794 has been attempted to create a new government depending on the enlightment ideas. French citizens were tired of economic problems and weak indecisive management, consequently this lead to a want for change. Economy sounded to be good in those days since both production and trade were quickly growing, but heavy taxes forced on common citizens made it nearly impossible for citizens to conduct profits. Besides another big problem French had was the extravagant expending and indecisive Louis XVI who led matters to drift. The want for change came from the inspiration by the success of Americans Revolution, the reason for revolution was the weak and indecisive leaders that just brought more economic problems.
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Sybil Conner



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PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 7:25 pm    Post subject: Can you edit this plz? Reply with quote

The French revolution, from 1789 through the Reign of Terror in 1794, was an try to create a new government depending on the enlightment ideas. French citizens were tired of economic problems and weak indecisive management. consequently, this led to a want for change. Economy seemed to be good in those days, since both production and trade were quickly growing. but, heavy taxes forced on common citizens made it nearly impossible for them to profit. Another big problem the French had was the extravagant expending and indecisiveness of Louis XVI, who led matters adrift. The want for change has been inspired by the success of the American Revolution.

Edit: tmahurin22s answer is good, too, except the word lead should be led
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Weston R.



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PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 7:25 pm    Post subject: Can you edit this plz? Reply with quote

One word I missed: change expending to expenditures. Sorry, it was late when I edited that. Report It
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Lucia Chow



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PostPosted: Wed Dec 12, 2007 7:25 pm    Post subject: Can you edit this plz? Reply with quote

The French Revolution, throughout the periods 1789 through the Reign of Terror in 1794, was fought to create a new government depending on the enlightment ideas . French citizens were tired of economic problems and weak, indecisive management. consequently, this lead to a want for change. Economy established government sounded good in those days, since both production and trade were quickly growing. but, heavy taxes forced on common citizens made it nearly impossible for citizens to accomplish a profit. Another big problem the French had was with the extravagant spendings and indecisiveness of Louis XVI, who lead matters adrift. A want for change came from the inspiring success of the American Revolution.
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